Book review: ‘Hummingbirds’ by Joshua Gaylord

Leo Binhammer is used to ruling the roost as the only male in a female-dominated English department at Carmine-Casey Academy, an elite all-girls private school in New York City. And he plays the part well, lapping up the attention hoisted upon him by the nubile school girls desperate for his attention. Not in a creepy way, I mean; the man’s not a pedophile. But does he enjoy being the center of attention, doted upon by both students and middle-aged single mothers? Yes. Yes, he does.

But the joy of the girls’ hero-worship comes to a screeching halt with the arrival of a newcomer. Young, handsome and aloof Ted Hughes — like the poet, but not like the poet — comes to  Carmine-Casey amid the twittering of students’ whispers, and not without a connection to Binhammer’s past. And present. And possibly future. Now faced with sharing his students’ devotion with someone he recognizes as charismatic but still despises, Binhammer is shaken to the core.

Throw in delusions of grandeur on the part of some of the students — like young playwright Liz Warren — and you’ve got a concoction for some serious dramz — just on a larger, more intellectual scale.

And that’s truly how I would describe Joshua Gaylords’ Hummingbirds — a Gossip Girl for the thinking woman or man. Of course, it lacks the salacious gossip quality of a Gossip Girl novel . . . and that’s what makes those books so compulsively readable for me.

What this one lacks in scandalous dirt, however, it makes up for through vivid characterization and an attempt to really get to the core of one man: Binhammer. Did it work, though? I don’t know. By the time I finished Hummingbirds, I can’t say I felt any more deeply for Leo than I did when first cracking the spine here. In fact, I felt one of the most dangerous emotions of all for any reader:  indifference.

That was my major issue with the novel, which I read quickly but failed to truly connect with: there was an emotional component completely missing — something that would make me want to have coffee with or chat with these characters. Dixie Doyle, another of the students known less for her intellect and more for her flirtatious attitude, was someone I found fascinating on the surface — but I never got a good read on her.

I enjoyed Gaylord’s wonderful turns of phrase and keen observations — including the line providing the book’s title. Looking upon the swarms of girls roaming the halls of Carmine-Casey, Binhammer “is reminded of hummingbirds, their delicate, overheated bodies fretting in short, angled bursts of movement around a bottle of red sugar water.”

Lines like this are scattered through the story, providing a lyrical and lovely way of looking at the habits of folks here — destructive, oblivious — but that wasn’t enough to really draw me into Hummingbirds. Much as I wanted to step into the frame, I was always starkly at a distance.


3 out of 5!

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Review copy provided by TLC Book Tours

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10 thoughts on “Book review: ‘Hummingbirds’ by Joshua Gaylord

  1. It is hard to put your finger on what persuades a reader to invest in a character, but it is easy to spot when it is missing. Great, honest review.

  2. Oh no! Sounds like it had great potential… maybe I’ll still like the observations aspect of it… I have this to review later this month!

  3. the cover isn’t doing it for me, and though i vowed not to let covers sway me, i can’t say i’d pick this one up. 😦

    i’m a bit done with the teen prep school thing (and the vampire/wolf thing, too) and hope that some fresh YA stuff comes out soon.

    quality review–nice textual support for your critique. (i sound like a dorky teacher, right?)

  4. How I love an excellent 3 star review. Doesn’t mean you hated it, others might love, right? I think I just might wishlist this one. I love ‘wonderful turns of phrase and keen observations.’ THANKS.

  5. I’ve just started this one, and your points are well taken. Although I’m probably enjoying it more because I’m a product of an all girls high school, and we had a teacher very much like Leo Binhammer! Reading Hummingbirds (I loved that description too) is a bit like reading my yearbook 🙂

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  7. Thanks for being a part of this tour and for sharing your thoughts. I’m glad that you were able to find some things that you enjoyed about the book … I’m just sorry that it didn’t work better for you as a whole.

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